As I was wandering
Through a dense forest
Enveloped in fog
Smoky and blurred
Nothing could be seen
None could be heard
I was anxious yet keen
To see what was beyond
The murky, sombre green
And then, I saw her abscond
From this eerie scene
I followed her
She was the one
Her silhouette so divine
The same as yesterday
The same as everyday
Gowned in luminous white
So serene
So pristine
In the Full Moon light
She glimmered as she raced
It was then that I paced
To touch her just once !
To feel her just once !
And then she calmly stood
Smiling at me
Waiting for me
I hared as fast as I could
Alas, this is the moment
Every night, of my torment
When I am wide awake
In my world of reality
Full of truthful brutality
Nevertheless a promise I make
To see her again
Hoping, not in vain
Another enchanting night
In my uncanny dream site
To touch her just once !!
To feel her just once !!
——
Anushree Dutta
Carmel never seemed so romantic😉👍 However, hard the Montazzians tried at the exhibitions☺! Now I know☺
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lol…exceptions are not examples…😉
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Its so clear and beautiful.
The way you merged it with the strong, beautiful , reality – forest ,image.
God bless 🙂
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Thanks a lot for reading it and sharing these amazing words..They mean a lot to me..
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Awesome,
Anushree Duttaji.
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Thanks for stopping by….
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Very beautiful!
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Thanks a bunch…😃
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Lovely piece. Drew me in and held me spellbound.
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Thanks a bunch. I am glad you liked it..
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One word.
Beautiful!
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Thanks a lot…
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You’re welcome ❤
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Touching lines… Loved it 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by..
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Amazing creativity amazing thoughts what else make a good calligraphy and this one is an apt example …
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Thanks a lot for reading it and sharing your beautiful thoughts..
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Welcome girl… keep exploring the creative head …
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Sure. When I have such motivating people around me, its definitely gonna help.
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Haha thanks …
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Delightful…..Love the evocative imagery….wonderful use of words. Thanks for stopping b me…and following. Will keep in touch…. Hugs!
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Thanks a lot for investing your precious time in reading my post and also sharing your thoughts.
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Bless you…..Hugs!
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😃
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of the vices few;
i love,
forever chasing
after a hint of you…….
beautiful poem………loved it!! 🙂 🙂
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Thanks a lot…
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My pleasure……..! 🙂 🙂
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Lovely poetry…
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Thanks a bunch…😃
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Darling you painted such a beautiful medaphoric picture, of loving delight!
i also see that you dropped in for a read,
methanks
chris
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Thanks a ton.. So delighted to read your feedback…
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Even when i’m negative?
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Haha..we will see then..even your negative feedback may teach me something. We never know..
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A beautiful tale of uncanny dreams of romantic love
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Thanks a lot for always being so generous…
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You’re welcome. My pleasure
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I just nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award:
https://elcoleccionistahipnotico.com/2016/11/20/mystery-blogger-award/
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I am sorry. I missed out on that..
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Oh, dont worry, you can make it whenever you want or just leave it, you dont have to do it if you dont want it
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Your poetry is exceptional. Thanks for sharing and for following. Best wishes. Brick
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Thanks a lot Brick. I am glad you liked my poetry.😃
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Beautiful poetry! I also like the picture.
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Thanks. I painted it..
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I have had the similar experience… fortunately could connect her through my dreams twice… You can take a look at the post.. The Dream and The Heartbreak
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Sure..👍
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Very good. Thank you for following me, much appreciated.
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It’s a pleasure following your blog. Infact I am helping myself by going through your amazing posts. And thanks a lot for your feedback.
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So simple and amazing lines Anushree! Glad to meet you 😊
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Thanks a ton. Glad to meet you too..
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Anushree finding the meaning of this poem is bit difficult for me.Let me try.Eventhough if we don’t know anything about romance it is in our subconscious mind?
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Are anu,kya me sahi tha?Actually i am very bad in understanding tough poems 😛
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Hey, Sorry. Didn’t get time to reply. This poem is about a man’s dream. He keeps seeing a girl, who is really beautiful, keeps chasing her but can never touch her, as he wakes up every night at the moment when he is about to touch her. So, it is called “The Unfinished Tale of Love”. I hope this helps. Let me know in case you have any other questions.
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since the writer was a you(women) i didn’t thought of such a scenario.Thanks 🙂
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This was too damn good, Anushree. ❤
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Thanks a lot dear Ananya..😃
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It is so beautifully written..! I am glad I happened to drop by! 🙂
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Thanks a bunch Tanya for stopping by and sharing your thoughts.
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Very nice piece of work, very good read.
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Thanks a lot..😊
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Hi Anushree!I have started something to let people know each other.Click here to know more https://sasha1010blog.wordpress.com/2016/12/07/lets-know-each-other-6/
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Good initiative..
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Thanks a lot dear!do visit the other blogs too🙂
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Surely..
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Lovely poem and image Anushree. I love the painting. Did you create it? Thanks for following my blog. blessings, Brad
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Thanks a bunch Brad. Yes I made the painting.
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Wonderful. Do you have your art anywhere to see on your blog?
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https://mypoeticjourneysite.wordpress.com/2016/12/08/madhubani-painting-indian-folk-art/
The link above shows few of them. Will keep posting in future. You can also check my facebook page to see more of my artworks. The link for the same is https://www.facebook.com/Anushrees-Artworks-1261292250554704/?ref=aymt_homepage_panel
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Thanks
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My pleasure Brad. And thanks a lot for liking my fb page.
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You’re welcome. I look forward to connecting more.
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👍
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Nice poem, thanks for sharing! Thanks also for the follow, look forward to seeing more of yours – peace and blessings! 🙂
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Thanks a lot for your feedback. And you are welcome. 👍😊
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